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Woman 's work

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                   one of the big decisions  is that a woman  must make is whether to stay home with her children  or to go t o work .today woman has  entered the field of work and achieved success . Men is equal to women  and they  have the same rights.  So,  there are some people agree with woman working and others who are against woman' work. My point of view is that woman's place is in her house .

               On one hand ,Woman's work is very important nowadays. There are some people who agree with woman's work. They assure that woman should work to achieve her self esteem . Also, it is necessary  for her to work to improve her skills and to apply what she had studied before . in addition to that she should to be independent financially from her husband . Many women work to increase their incomes and to help their husbands . Work  protects women against certain negative aspects of being full-time homemakers .women prefer to work to spend her time in work especially when she is   divorced and to make friendship and to interact with others to exchange information .

                  On the other hand ,some people are against woman's work for many reasons . They argue that woman neglects  most of her duties in her home as a wife and a mother as she spend most of her time out side the home .If she has  baby ,she needs to put him on babysitters or day care  and therefore she should pay  a lot of money .Some people  argue that there are a lot of problems that result from woman's work such as   Increasing in divorce rate and or unstable relationship amongst couples. Work has a bad  effect on her health as she retuned her house very tired .So I am against woman's work.

            To sum up , Men and women are by no means equal ,but I think that her first role is to stay at home and to take care of her family. Woman's work should be a carefully planned decision.

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  Woman Working

     

  Introduction:-   

**one of the big decisions a woman  must make is whether to stay home with her children or to go back to work.

**Some people argue that woman ’s place is  in the house .(I am with this opinion).

**Others argue that one of the woman ’s right is to work.

   **body(1):-

-Reasons for supporting woman ’s work:-

a)To bring money.

b)To make friendship and social relationship.

C)To gain experience and information .

d)To spend her spare time.

e)To achieve her independence.

   **Body (2):-

Reasons for protesting woman’s work:--

a)working woman neglects her  duties in home.

b) She spends money on babysitters or day care.

C)Increasing in divorce rate and or unstable relationship amongst couples.

d)She spends a lot of time outside her home.

e)work has a bad  effect on her health.

    **The conclusion:-

        Men and women are by no means equal ,but I think that her first role is to stay at home and to take care of her family.

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water pollution in egypt

 

The last draft

  

What do you think of when you hear the word pollution ? There are a lot of kinds  of pollution ,but the most prominent kind is water pollution that meant any chemical, physical ,or biological change in quality of water that has harmful effect on any living thing that drinks or uses or lives in it .God creates environment without any trace of pollution but the man has probably polluted the environment since he appeared on earth .People need clean water to grow crops and to set up factories  and for drinking and recreation .So, water pollution has many causes ,effects and also some suggested solutions.

                  Water pollution arises from many sources .Farmers use large amounts of chemical fertilizers that are washed into the water ways and damage the water supply and the life within it .These fertilizers can increase the amounts of nitrates and phosphates in the water .

.In addition to that ,rain is an important pollutant as it washes soil into streams of rivers . Water pollution also comes from ships that give out oil and refuse into water.

                 Water pollution has an effect on many things .Dead fish ,birds ,dolphins, and many other animals  often wind upon beaches ,killed by pollutants in their habitat .Various toxicities result from drinking water or eating fish from such areas .In addition to that ,water pollution disrupts the natural food chain as well , pollutants such as lead and cadmium are eaten by tiny animals ,later ,these animals are consumed by fish and shellfish ,and the food chain continues to be disrupted at all higher levels .

                To end this problem ,one should follow theses solutions. Repairing and replacement of leaking and malfunctioning equipments .Also, spreading awareness through media ,impose ing strict laws and financial penalties on anyone who pollutes water.

                  To sum up, water pollution has become a terrible danger which threatens life on earth .Hence this problem should be finished quickly as our need for water  in Egypt is expected to increase in the near future. This because there will be more people who will need water for drinking ,washing ,and irrigation purposes. Therefore, If we do  not save water we shall face problems. 

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Water pollution (Final draft)

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                                     What do you think of when you hear the word pollution ? There are a lot of kinds  of pollution ,but the most prominent kind is water pollution that meant any chemical, physical ,or biological change in quality of water that has harmful effect on any living thing that drinks or uses or live in it .God creates environment without any trace of pollution but the man has probably polluting the environment since he appeared on earth .People need clean water to grow crops and to operate factories and for drinking and recreation .So, water pollution has many causes ,effects and also some suggested solutions.

                  Water pollution arises from many sources .Farmers use large amounts of chemical fertilizers that are washed into the water ways and damage the water supply and the life within it .These fertilizers can increase the amounts of nitrates and phosphates in the water .Another reason is allowing livestock to graze near water sources often results in organic waste products being washed  into the waterways. Also, clearing of land can lead to erosion of soil into the rivers .In addition to that ,rain is an important pollutant as it washes soil into streams of rivers .Rivers which also polluted by factories 's waste that are carelessly poured into them .Water pollution also comes from ships that give out oil and refuse into water.

                 Water pollution has an effect on many things .Dead fish ,birds ,dolphins, and many other animal often wind upon beaches ,killed by pollutants in their habitat .Various toxicities result from drinking water or eating fish from such areas .In addition to that ,water pollution disrupts the natural food chain as well , pollutants such as lead and cadmium are eaten by tiny animals ,later ,these animals are consumed by fish and shellfish ,and the food chain continues to be disrupted at all higher levels .

                 To end this problem ,one should follow theses solutions. Repairing and replacement of leaking and malfunctioning equipments .Also, spread awareness through media ,impose strict laws and financial penalties on anyone who pollutes water .People must keep litters , pet waste ,leaves ,and grass clippings out of gutters and storm drains .

 

                  To sum up, water pollution has become a terrible danger which threaten life on earth .Hence this problem should be finished quickly as our need for water  in Egypt is expected to increase in the near future. This because there will be more people who will need water for drinking ,washing ,and irrigation purposes. Therefore, If we do  not save and  economize on water we shall face problems.

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Water pollution"           "

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                     What do you think of when you hear the word pollution ? There are a lot of kinds  of pollution ,but the most prominent kind is water pollution that meant any chemical, physical ,or biological change in quality of water that has harmful effect on any living thing that drinks or uses or live in it .God creates environment without any trace of pollution but the man has probably polluting the environment since he appeared on earth .People need clean water to grow crops and to operate factories and for drinking and recreation .So, water pollution has many causes ,effects and also some suggested solutions.

                    On one hand ,water pollution arises from many sources .Farmers use large amounts of chemical fertilizers that are washed into the water ways and damage the water supply and the life within it .These fertilizers can increase the amounts of nitrates and phosphates in the water .Another reason is allowing livestock to graze near water sources often results in organic waste products being washed  into the waterways. Also, clearing of land can lead to erosion of soil into the rivers .In addition to that ,rain is an important pollutant as it washes soil into streams of rivers .Rivers which also polluted by factories 's waste that are carelessly poured into them .Water pollution also comes from ships that give out oil and refuse into water.

                 On the other hand ,water pollution has an effect on many things .Dead fish ,birds ,dolphins, and many other animal often wind upon beaches ,killed by pollutants in their habitat. Dysenteries and various toxicities result from drinking water or eating fish from such areas .In addition to that ,water pollution disrupts the natural food chain as well , pollutants such as lead and cadmium are eaten by tiny animals ,later ,these animals are consumed by fish and shellfish ,and the food chain continues to be disrupted at all higher levels .

                 Some suggested solution for water pollution. Repairing and replacement of leaking and malfunctioning equipments .Also, spread awareness through media ,impose strict laws and financial penalties on anyone who pollutes water .People must keep litters , pet waste ,leaves ,and grass clippings out of gutters and storm drains .

                  Finally ,water pollution has become a terrible danger which threaten life on earth .Hence this problem should be finished quickly as our need for water  in Egypt is expected to increase in the near future. This because there will be more people who will need water for drinking ,washing ,and irrigation purposes. Therefore, If we do  not save and  economize on water we shall face problems.

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water pollution in egypt

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Introduction:*

Meaning of water pollution.-A

B-The importance of water.

C-Kinds of water pollution.

*the causes of water pollution(body 1):

Oil that spilled by transport ships .-A

B-Using large amounts of herbicides and pesticides by farmers .

C-Chemical fertilizers that used by farmers .

D-Allowing life stock to graze near water resources.

E-Clearing of land can lead to erosion of soil into the river.

F-Waste and sewage generated by industry can get into the water supply .

Rain that washes soil into streams and rivers.-G

*Effects of water pollution :(body 2)

A-Dead fish ,birds , dolphins ,and any other animal often wind up on beaches .

Water pollution disrupts the natural food .- B

People can get diseases .-C

D-Ecosystem can be severely changed or destroyed by water pollution.

Solutions for water pollution(body3):*

A-Repair and replacement of leaking equipments.

B-Impose strict laws on ships.

C-Spread awareness through media .

D-Build factories away off sources of water.

Conclusion:*

Clearly ,the problems associated with water pollution have the capabilities to disrupt life on our planet to a great extent

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