first draft * my dream job is a teacher

  teacher

                   What is my dream job !!! it is the difficult  question. To decide what to be in the future needs careful planning .so , today job is very important factor of our life. With job I can fulfill our desire , earn money , gain so status, and utilize the possessed skills. When I was little, I used to want to be a doctor to help people, when I got older and realized that wasn’t a job suitable for me; I wanted to become a teacher. but , this job has its advantages and its disadvantages.

                   Why I want to be a teacher? When I sat and thought about the question, why do I want to be a teacher?, many different reasons went through my mind. First, teaching is the job our prophets is to teach and enlighten  people  .Second, helping  a child with something they can’t do on their own because I want to make an impact on someone’s life. Third, one of the most important benefits of becoming a teacher is that teachers contribute to the shaping of the future generations. They make a difference to society by playing a vital role in nurturing young minds. Also,  teacher is the person who produce doctors, engineers, politicians and pilots….etc.

                           There are a lot of disadvantages of being a teacher. Some disadvantages of being a teacher could be these: a teacher has not much free time for his/her family, he/she forgets his/her own children, he/she has to work not only at school but at home too, a teacher’s pay is not very big. They spend more time with students than their own children. Sometimes teachers are strict with own children, but indulgent with students and they agree with students but they can not understand their own children at home. That is because teacher spends a lot of time at school with students and has not enough free time for his/her children. But a good teacher has to coordinate his/her job with family and has to find free time for them. Teachers spend a lot of time at school and even they have to work at home to make lesson plans, to grade papers, to do all those reports about their classes. A teacher has many responsibilities and the reward for that is not always appropriate. We all know that teachers’ pay is not very big. For good teachers, salary is not a very important thing to them in life. These teachers do not worry about money. The important thing for them is students and their age. If teacher is good at his subject and he/she want to make money, he/she could give private tutoring lessons. He/she could have a few groups of students and he/she could have a second salary from his/her private lessons.

                               In my opinion, a good teacher should be one who puts her heart into teaching. This is because only by doing so will the students feel their passion and hard work. When a teacher strives hard for the students, students will put in their effort as well. If a teacher dislikes her job, goes to classes in a bad mood, her teaching would also be affected and students would not be able to enjoy lessons as well. Another point that makes a good teacher would be his/her patience. Teachers should not get upset or even worse, give up on the students who are not so strong in their studies. Instead, they should have the patience to slowly coach them, give them extra lessons, and find different ways to encourage them. Let them know that the teacher would always be by their side, helping them and guiding them along. If even the teachers do not care for them, they would not have anyone else to turn to and would eventually give up on themselves and their studies. Thus, teachers must have the patience to go on even after their students give up

                          Overall, teaching is very difficult job because a teacher has two jobs. The first job is to impart his/her knowledge to students and encourage them to have enquiring minds. The second job is to be like a compass in their students' lives. It means that a teacher should be able to give directions to students. He/she should direct them towards an honest way of life. The best pay for his/her hard job is to see his/her ex-students become honest people who go on to have satisfying careers, but I like to be a teacher.

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Teacher

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Q1: What is the importance of job in my life ?

Q2:What is meant by teaching ?

Q3: What are the advantages of being  a teacher ?

Q4:What are the disadvantages of being a teacher ?

Q5: How can I improve my skills to be a good teacher ?

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final draft

Final draft *The educational system*

               The educational system in any country is very important. It consists of four elements: teacher, student, curriculum, and the educational environment .These elements are very important for any successful educational system. If one of these elements fails, the educational system will face serious problems. Thus, we should face these problems and find appropriate solutions as the education is a great mean to achieve progress.

                In Egypt  ,the educational system faces many problems .There is lack of good teachers for example, in the primary stage  a teacher of math can teach others subject such as English ,science  .Also the materials are so old , bad and not interesting at all as it depends on rote learning rather than thinking . In addition to that there is bad relationship between students and teachers and there is not any kind of respect between them. Also there are not enough laboratories so the students have to memorize all theories without any kind of practice or training .Besides that the buildings are so bad and there are not enough classrooms to include all students that reflect badly on the learning process.

                There are some suggest solutions for improving the educational system in Egypt. The ministry of education should update the curriculum and make it more attractive and suitable to students and with the field of work. The teachers should use the technology and teaching aids to facilitate the process of learning. In addition to that all schools should provided with modern laboratories and libraries and  students should train in using computers and logging onto the internet web to get in touch with information resources in all over the world .

                To sum up, education helps us to build our society, our progress and our future. The ministry of education should put serious strategies to solve the problems of the educational system and improve it, as the educational system is necessary to  any country.

 

First draft





First draft *The educational system*

               The educational system in any country is very important. It consists of four elements: teacher, student, curriculum, and the educational environment .These elements are very important for any successful educational system. If one of these elements fails, the educational system will face serious problems. Thus, we should face these problems and find appropriate solutions as the education is a great mean to achieve progress.

                In Egypt  ,the educational system faces many problems .There is lack of good teachers for example, in the primary stage  a teacher of math can teach others subject such as English ,science  .Also the materials are so old , bad and not interesting at all as it depends on rote learning rather than thinking . In addition to that there is bad relationship between students and teachers and there is not any kind of respect between them. Also there are not enough laboratories so the students have to memorize all theories without any kind of practice or training .Besides that the buildings are so bad and there are not enough classrooms to include all students that reflect badly on the learning process.

                There are some suggest solutions for improving the educational system in Egypt. The ministry of education should update the curriculum and make it more attractive and suitable to students and with the field of work. The teachers should use the technology and teaching aids to facilitate the process of learning. In addition to that all schools should provided with modern laboratories and libraries and  students should train in using computers and logging onto the internet web to get in touch with information resources in all over the world .

                To sum up, education helps us to build our society, our progress and our future. The ministry of education should put serious strategies to solve the problems of the educational system and improve it, as the educational system is necessary toany  any country.

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Outline

Out Line (The educational system in Egypt)

Introduction:

      The education system is the mirror that reflects the level of progress.

Body (1):

      The problems that face the educational system in Egypt:-

* Buildings are in bad condition.

* Lack of good teachers.

* increasing numbers of students.

* Bad materials.

Body (2):-

     Some suggested solutions to solve the educational system in Egypt:-

* update the curriculum.

* providing good educational environment.

* providing enough classrooms.

* training the teachers to use modern educational methods in teaching. 

The conclusion:-

       To sum up, we should put our hands together to reshape the educational system in Egypt, as it is important to any country which seeks progress.

final draft

Woman's work

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                   One of the biggest decisions  is that a women  must make is whether to stay home with her children  or to go t o work .Today woman has  entered the field of work and achieved success . Men are equal to women and they have the same rights.  So, there are some people agree with woman's work and others who are against woman's work. My point of view is that woman's place is in her house   .

               On one hand, woman's work is very important nowadays. There are some people who agree with woman's work. They assure that woman should work to achieve her self esteem   . Also, it is necessary   for her to work to improve her skills and to apply what she had studied before. In addition to that she should to be financially independent from her husband. Many women work to increase their incomes and to help their husbands. Work  protects women against certain negative aspects of being full-time homemakers .women prefer to work to spend her time in work especially when she is   divorced and to make friendship and to interact with others to exchange information .

                  On the other hand  ,some people are against woman's work for many reasons . They argue that woman neglects most of her duties in her home as a wife and as a mother as she spend most of her time out side the home .If she has baby  ,she needs to put him on babysitters or day care  and therefore she should pay  a lot of money .Some people  argue that there are a lot of problems that result from woman's work such as   increasing in divorce rate and/ or unstable relationship amongst couples. Work has a bad  effect on her health as she retuned her house very tired .So I am against woman's work .As my mother is a  working woman and she faces a lot of problems .

            To sum up , men and women are by no means equal ,but I think that her first role is to stay at home and to take care of her family. Woman's work should be a carefully planned decision.

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